Text Reconstruction
Benjamin Franklin, one
of America's first noteworthy writers, describes in his
autobiography a method he used to improve his writing skill.
As a youth he worked in his brother's print shop where
articles by many fine writers were published. When he
admired an essay, he wrote several words from each sentence.
These he calls "short hints of the sentiment in each
sentence." Next he mixed the hints into random order and set
them aside.
Several weeks later
Franklin tried to arrange the hints into their original order to
recreate the logical organization of the essay. He says, "This
was to teach me method in the arrangement of thoughts." Then the
future author of Poor Richard's Almanac attempted to write each
sentence from just the hints, checking back to the original and
noting any deviations, trying to master the vocabulary, sentence
structure, and style of the writer.
Jack London used a
similar procedure of analyzing and reconstructing selections of
admired prose. According to the New York Times Book Review Jack
London, who wrote The Sea Wolf and is the most widely read
American author in the world, was raised penniless and worked at
many hard, low-paying jobs before embarking on a literary
career. When in his mid-twenties he decided to become a
professional writer, he "analyzed the stories he liked, or
copied them out by hand to learn how they were put together, and
wrote his own pieces with their example in mind."
A variation of
Franklin's text reconstruction (TRC) is used in the workbook
Analytical Writing and Thinking. The authors wrote sample papers
and then jumbled the sentences. Students number the sentences in
what they consider the best order. Then they compare
arrangements and discuss differences with other students,
pinpointing the information and logic they employ. Finally, they
write the sentences in the order numbered.
Through arranging
sentences and discussing their rationale, students gradually
learn to read more accurately: They learn to focus on grasping
the full meaning of each sentence so that logical relationships
between sentences can be understood.
Students also learn to
recognize and use coherence and cohesion devices employed by
effective writers. They see the cues, transition words - such
as "so," "but," and "therefore" - and relationship patterns
that enable them to order the sentences. Gradually they see how
these cues can be used in their own writing.
What Franklin called
"method in the arrangement of thoughts" is more commonly known
as logical organization, a major area of weakness in student
papers. One of the most common forms of logical organization
found in writing is generalization supported by specific
details. Many high school graduates have not learned the
necessary thinking skills to work from the general to the
specific, observes Morton, which not only makes them poor
writers but also leaves them unable to master study skills such
as outlining and note-taking.
Arrange sentences to make
an argument
Five-paragraph
paper theme
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